These drafts offend me, the threatening nature of the black and white T overwhelms my mind with thoughts of suffering and death, you need must tone it down. however the black and white J draft excites my entire body. the ratio of negative space to filled space is soothing, but at the same time it exudes a funky feeling that makes me want to dance. it would b good if u made the picture symmetrical by extending the J's off the bottom right hand of the page. the color drafts are just totally blasé. i want to see more emotion, more PIZAZZ! there is still too much negative space that u just filled with texture. work to fill that space, and you will achieve greatness.
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These drafts offend me, the threatening nature of the black and white T overwhelms my mind with thoughts of suffering and death, you need must tone it down. however the black and white J draft excites my entire body. the ratio of negative space to filled space is soothing, but at the same time it exudes a funky feeling that makes me want to dance. it would b good if u made the picture symmetrical by extending the J's off the bottom right hand of the page. the color drafts are just totally blasé. i want to see more emotion, more PIZAZZ! there is still too much negative space that u just filled with texture. work to fill that space, and you will achieve greatness.
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